..food.

eating my flesh
raw
sharp edged teeth
tearing it
in lumps
red
soft
squelching
..ummm. . .
blood
my blood
dripping
from this piece of my chest
uh, it's dirty
i don't have manners
but yeah.. i like it
i'm hungry
and i want more. . .

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

Well this is certainly a different piece. It was raw and had some vivid descriptions even though it was so few in words. I guess we all kill ourselves sometimes slowly and sometimes quickly and sometimes we just torture our selves because it's in our nature. Nice piece.


Brette

[EliJoLee]

woww.
not what im used to of reading your work but....
i love it!!!!
very unique and dark.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is very different!
Seems like a person is killing himself deliberately, Very raw!