..his time will come.

 

 

he believed things would be all right

he believed his time would come

he believed in GOD

he believed in GOOD

 

And

 

he died waiting

 

Hoping

 

his time will come

he may not!

 

but

still

he believed

.

Author's Note

~sometimes... we hope to fool ourselves ~

Reviews

[Deepshikha]

"his time will come/
he may not!"
Ah, the wonderful irony of how we cling even when we've realized it's a terribly futile effort. I liked how you phrased this and the simplicity is a wonderful contrast to the depth of what you're trying to say. Only one thing: "he believe" ...are you trying to say believes? Or believed? I'm guessing it's just a minor typo. Great write!

[Vaishali..^_^]

Aww..!!ya we fool our self..or it just happens...we don't have any control on that..
we usually tend to believe so much on something...when we can't afford to lose it even when we know we have lost it...it's just a lil ray of hope inside us that force us to believe and don't let us lose hope..it is our tendency to hold on to something which we love...
great work^_^

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The irony in this piece is very striking.
I can highly relate myself with it..Very well penned!

[mystic soul]

rightly said it so happens sometimes... we know the truth but we try to fool ourselves... nice poem!:)