Invisible Magic

For my friend Lily Mae... Just something so she can see how important she is to humanity. it is short but it says it all.

 

A fairy dances through the forest

       Naked… emotionally exposed

              To the world

So her heart can see the beauty in the trees.

Little does she know the world is captivated

By her graceful movements of humanity

And her heart makes the trees invisible to us.

 

Reviews

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

I had to stop and comment on this write. Was passing by and this caught my eye for the title. The read made my heart smile.
How well you capture the beautiful little nymph creature of light we know. I passed her by many times, and then one day something caused the light to go on.... and THERE SHE WAS!! Just exactly as you have described here. You have painted her picture using the exact right mixture of letters, spaces and meter. Well done Mr. RaRC (RWaC) :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... I just wanted to let her see how valuable she is to humanity. By the way what does (RWaC) mean?

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Oh! Made your moniker an acronym... Which seems redundant now that I think on it further. (Rebel With a Cause) = (RWaC). I know... Someone needs a life. 😏

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Man I went nuts trying to figure it out... Ha ha... I should have got that.

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Yes. I have seen ya round & had you pegged for a smart one. Got one by ya? Yeah me! :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

thsi poem made me wonder about the nature of her humanitarian efforts or indeed the ways in which she is an asset to humanity. thanks.

[The Analog Kid]

Very sweet poem about a friend.

[cilla]

I love those little pixie creatures and when they're around I can't see the trees either.

Nice work, Dale ... it does indeed say it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you lovely lady :)

[Light and ashes]

Love Lily, she truely is magic. This write for her is like her, lovely :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you.

[Light and ashes]

:) Your welcome

[Renée]

Aww very sweet, fairies are lovely creatures as I am sure Lily Mae is..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes she is and we need to let her know it :)

[Heather]

this poem made me smile!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Lily Mae]

Thank you Dale.. I'm humble by such a great gift of beauty.. I will treasure it and hold it to my heart always..xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks Lily... I am glad you liked it... i didn't want to mess it up or clutter it with too much wording... I wanted to get to the heart of the importance of your heart.