Warning Sign

A senryu

 

 

Shattered furniture

Is the beginning of the

Walls worst fears realized.

Reviews

[Androglossia]

Is not shattered furniture means shattered relationship?And is not shattered relationship means shattered home? And a home without souls is not a home at all. Ah, if only walls could talk.. Amazing how you have told a story with such brevity.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... You are in the ballpark of what I'm saying.

[Ruth]

Clever!
This is brilliant...your concise pieces are fabulous, love this xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you doll face xoxo

[Ruth]

Always xoxo

[†Tracey†]

Amen to that..x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Bless you :)

[†Tracey†]

As you should.. :P lol

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is just...you pick the word.

[Elizabeth]

This is my favorite thing you have ever written. All my favorite elements are here (and are not here) that's the best part... brevity. This could be the stage for so many scenes. Is it a midnight drunken fight between two lovers? Is it an abandoned house about to be torn down? It's a million things. LOVE.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love your analogy of this piece.thank you.

[Elizabeth]

:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I liked this one, without furniture, there is no living, no living room,
No seet, nor a place to feel comfy, as the walls are watching your nude
Being, but sitting on the floor can be so damn, delicious, as I did in Asia, with just my a*s on a bamboo mat. It's all within our spoiled heads, to have furniture, while it can be so delightful to sit on your damn a*s.... be zen, and breathe. Well, I was there at least not in between 4 walls, so, it makes a difference, but anyhow, lovely write, Dale, sweet Dale, Lovely thoughts....

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

A very interesting take on my words... you gave it another dimension I had not thought of.

I loved it, it made me think between all materialism, and true happiness..... xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Not what i intended but I love it when people see things beyond my thoughts. Absolutely lovely thinking beautelisa.

Hmmm, so what did you meant with it actually, sir, let me learn, from what I did interpret so differently, I know English is a scorpion for Dutchies :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It don't matter what I intended, it matters more what you took from my words... and i love what you took from them.

A diplomate you're..... what can I say? not going to beg in this case for justice lol....

[KAREN]

Thought provking! makes me think of a broken heart realizes their worst nightmare. This could mean many things to each reader. NICE!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.