Heaven Sent

Just another senryu

 

When you breathe a sigh

I hear an angel sing while

Her tears turn to rain.

Reviews

[SparrowSong]

These few words bring a range of emotion. This could have a few different meanings depending on how the reader approaches the write. I see it as one being moved to tears and allowing the tears to bring cleansing, a sigh of relief if you will. I really like this. Well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am glad you can see it have different meaning, the highest of compliments. Thank you for reading.

[David Scott]

Nice. I enjoy this style. Sometimes more is said with less.
Be well.

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice

[Ruth]

Gorgeous!
This rendered my heart so moved xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hearing that moves my heart.

[Ruth]

♥

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I can not make those hearts on here for some reason... when i try it doesn't show so here is my *heart* for you.

[Ruth]

AH, thank you sparkle xoxo

[Circe]

beauty that brings tears and cleansing, this is pure, palpable, great write.

[Starr Mist]

I love that's short, sweet, and it gets right to the point.
Most people are concerned with length, when length doesn't really matter in the scheme of writing.

Thanks for posting!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Tasha]

This is beautiful and sweet. Great write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Tasha]

You're welcome.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Her sighs are like a niagara fall... hidden, and true, only keen eyes can see, and write about.

Thank you for this one!
Nice!

E.L.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Her sighs are the oxygen that keeps me alive.
Thank you Beautelisa.

You're more than welcome, H2o doesn't exist without O2 loved your response.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I loved your review. My response was inspired by it.

As mine was to yours again ;) lol have a good day tomo!

[Cherrie]

very graceful and sweet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Lily Mae]

Absolute beauty at it's best..xo :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes you are :)

[Lily Mae]

Oh blush.. you charmer.. your just in a mood because your team didn't win :)