Not Just For Children(Halloween)

Halloween is for adults too.

 

Such a naughty angel

letting the devil

trick you into

letting him taste your treats.

All I had to do

was knock on your door

to turn you into a witch

riding this warlock

like a broom.

Suddenly I became a pirate

discovering your sunken treasure

as you morphed into a French maid

Tickling my fancy.

As the clock struck midnight

signaling the end of Halloween

I am glad it is simply you

laying by my side.

For fantasy can be fun at times,

nothing beats the reality

Of the real us.

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very funny write indeed! You affect the imagination of the "grown up" people with this fantasy-Halloween transformations. All the expressions are directed to this kind of special understanding with "naughty games", angel, French maid, to finally reach to your real self...but even in imagination we are real :)
Oh, Halloween finished so fast!

:: nour ::

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, really glad you enjoyed it.

[Fran Marie]

a cleverly penned piece....just right for some adult halloween fun...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yeah you got to love the treats you can get as an adult :)

[Chris]

THIS was a pleasure to listen to... thanks man.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[KAOlmsted]

Oh wow...I had to laugh because I love adult Halloween costumes for *ahem* ladies...what will it be this year: S****y nurse? S****y devil? S****y kitty? *laugh* But the ending of this made me go "awww...", which was unexpected, so points there ;-) Always fun to read you. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

-kimmer

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much... you can choose any of those outfits and I will not argue... Love can be fun but it should always be sweet.

[An owl on the moon]

That's a wild, wonderful, wicked kinda Halloween that makes me wish the day would get here quicker! All the best of the season to you and yours, my friend!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir, and the same to you.

[Mia]

Now this is my kind of Halloween poem. Clear write. Suggestive, charming and humorous with just the right amount of tenderness.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Just how I intended it, thank you very much.

[Leslie Philibert]

Funny and clever, good write, good theme well worked on !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Circe]

the imagery made me laugh, naughty angel, riding warlock like a broom, and french maid tickling!!! fabulous idea to bring some yummy spices to work, you have a cool mind!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh well thank you... I just love to have fun, including in my writing. Glad you liked it.

[Renée]

Oh I think this is my favorite write of yours ! I love Halloween and this one captures the adult fun perfectly !! Buwahahahahaaaaaaaaaaa

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... why should the kids have all the fun, adults need treats too.

[Renée]

ikr ( :

[Mrs Edith Hat]

Rather amusing. One of the better works I have read on this site, and one of the few worth mention.