Forever Flame

Hot senryu

 

The torch still burns bright

even though it’s no longer

in my hopeful grasp.

Reviews

[written in blood]

as long as the torch is lit hope exists!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Amen to that :)

[Seashell]

Wonderfully sad :()

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Babsie Boop.

[Seashell]

You're more than welcome dearest Dale xx

[SparrowSong]

The sweet memory shines bright in the dark spaces even though the light of hope long went dim. This holds such a wealth of emotion in so few words leaving the reader wonder if the feeling brings a smile or a tear. Well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

[LA Lorena]

so much said in so few words. I like the Japanese styles, but lack the patience to give much time to them. You have done a nice job with this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, it is quite a challenge but I get in the mood now and then.

[lee von cleef]

You tightened up my thoughts,I need to put my writing on a diet.Yours is working ,like the ant you are carrying the weight now.Amazing how bright and close things look across the empty night....to of held a light, even just to of felt its glow, brush your cheeks...little is as illuminating, as to be shot at and missed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Nicely said. You are like the Riddler hopped up on Rockstar energy drinks :)

[lee von cleef]

Get to work "Pigeon fever" breaking out all over Ark.I better wash up.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You crack me up.

[lee von cleef]

Really I got to go. That Damn Movie. Two cowboys can't talk anymore with out homophobic innuendos being tossed about,Keep your boots on,(Better Movie) Bell Star and Paul Newman,you get better traction that way! Man I loved her tassels!

[Circe]

we can watch it burn and still find it in something to believe. wonderfully expressed, great depths in just three lines.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again, sometimes I don't know where the words come from, they just flow through me like blood through my heart.

[Renée]

Beauty in longing...well done !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again young lady :)

[Renée]

oh you sweet talker .. always a pleasure ( ;

[Sheila Kline]

It's amazing how much meaning can be gleaned from so few words!! I just don't possess this gift....I would have to have a 20 line poem to say this!
Great job my friend!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, it is a challenge to put it in few words. An I enjoy a good challenge.

[FocusedAmnesia]

So beautifully done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[KAOlmsted]

I get either lost or unrequited love from this. Beautifully done. (You are too the master :-p)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you. I just enjoying doing them, it is a great challenge.