Forever Flame

Hot senryu

 

The torch still burns bright

even though it’s no longer

in my hopeful grasp.

Reviews

[Marie]

This is a very good senru...expresses a single excellent thought...
You should do more of them.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much, I have do a lot actually, They are fun to do. Glad you liked it.

[Tree]

Yes. I think I understand, we must adjust. That is what I take with me. Thank you for sharing these words of wisdom, sir.

Diego

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

And what you take from it is most important, thanks for sharing your thoughts.