Ride The Wind

I'll huff and I'll puff till I blow your senryu down.

 

Just one kiss blown from

Those glossy red lips makes me

So hard to handle.

Reviews

[writing mojo]

Ha HA very clever I like your style, dude!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you. I enjoy doing them.

[Renée]

hey little thang let me light your candle.... nice.....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

haha, The Black Crowes... nice.

[Renée]

fun senryu ( ;

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you :)

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

you write very bold, easy to read statements. going through your writing is fun(: and this one says a lot. it can be interpreted in many ways.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you for the compliment and all the reviews... just using the knowledge I gained over the years to do what I enjoy.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

well keep it up. your writing are short, impacting, and easy to recall in the memory while going about ones day. that's what i LOVE about them!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I enjoy doing this senryus... saying a lot in a few words is a challenge... not that I do not like writing longer pieces too.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

it's something i couldnt do...my poetry is always so long i sometimes have to cut parts out haha.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I do write longer ones too... nothing wrong with that, means you have a lot to say.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

indeed it does. i'll have to check one of those out. any suggestions?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I can send a couple request of my favorites I have written or you can look around... coarse you have read so many things of mine tonight, I wouldn't want to take all your time up.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

i don't mind a single bit(: send as many as you'd like!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thanks, and if there is something in particular that you want me to read of yours send it my way.

[Rebecca Hope Rouston]

will do! :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

:)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Blown down, blown away.

[Androglossia]

Men showing a little of vulnerability is sweet. Very sweet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[Circe]

Ahhh... just too hot! think we're all knocked down now :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well let me help you up then... thank you.

[Frieda P]

Double double toil and trouble...Nice one or two!! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hehehe :)

[Lily Mae]

Oh my.. blush...xo You ate to much of my salsa last night lol..x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That's right... and now I m addicted. xoxo

[Lily Mae]

I'll add you to my Salsa of the month club.. hahaha So the end of Jan..xo lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That long... OMG can you say withdrawals, LOL

[Marie]

Excellent senyru...sweet and hot...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you very much.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Oh . a sizzling Senryu ... hummm ...

Good and Hot ... Jazzy :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you.. hope it warmed you up.