Frozen In Desire

Chilling with a senryu

 

Those ice cold fingers

running down your spine could be

what torches the heart.

Reviews

[written in blood]

brilliant...

[quinfinn]

truly resonant and accurate depiction here. nicely worded, well done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[quinfinn]

great write!

[Sarah Redigan]

Oh so many diffrent ways someone can take this one nice job

[Frieda P]

OMG perfection in a Senyru!!

.....and Woohooo Dale, nice one! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Tree]

Better to have her run those fingers down your spine, than break one off inside your throat... So I'm with Lee on this one. Run

Diego

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am stretching and got my tennis shoes on... thank you sir.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nice. Haiku these days.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[revalatia]

nicely said.. i felt that..

[Stacey Watts]

I like this. Says so very much. Reminds me of a poem by Robert Frost, Fire and Ice popped into my head while I read this. Nice work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I will have to go read that one.

[Stacey Watts]

I like it. It is a good one. Not one of his more well known ones. I stumbled upon it several years ago. :)

[Marie]

Counted the syllables...perfect...love the contrast...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, contrast is great in testing people's perception.

[lee von cleef]

Or it could be your Spidy sense telling you to run Forest Run.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It is all about perception and instinct.