Frozen In Desire

Chilling with a senryu

 

Those ice cold fingers

running down your spine could be

what torches the heart.

Reviews

[Krithika Raghavan]

What your fingers write
Could be what exclaimed as truth
it torches the heart;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[DIVYA]

So true. So true.
Love lights up on the unlikeliest of reasons...things ...and people.

You were brilliant here!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I love that interpretation of the poem. You are brilliant yourself.

[DIVYA]

thank you.

[ms. barrie]

i agree with Rock n Roll Cowboy, Divya, you are indeed brilliant! :)

[DIVYA]

Thank you BarrieJoy! It's a happy Sunday for me.

[ms. barrie]

oh it's Sunday? i did not realize that. and you are quite welcome, Divya ...Happy Sunday, at least it's not Monday (not very original, i know) :)) - xoxo

[Muse]

Omg that's brilliant! I will nolonger assume the worst when frostbite tickles my nose...there is hope...that it might warm up my toes?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is right, hope should never be given up on... glad you liked it.

[Muse]

I did..I faved.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I saw that, and I am honored :)

[Lily Mae]

Well yes..they are ancient fire starters :) lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You do the voodoo we know so well, LOL

[Renée]

nicely done ..true dat !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

:)