I Dyed

I Dyed

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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A colored senryu

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You caused me to dye,

cause my skin is now pale blue

and my heart dark green.

© 2013 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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A little gross...was an autopsy done...?

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Probably should be one, LOL
Dark green heart, that's pretty bad...although this is pretty good...

Did you add that second 'now' for syllable, sounds redundant, how about 'a'...just saying, still like this one, says a lot.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Yeah, I meant the first word to be cause... duh on my part...

Thank you very much.
Sometimes we have to color ourselves in different hues to please others.
Very deep.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you, your intellect is always wonderful.
DIVYA

12 Years Ago

So is yours. :)
you are welcome.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..