Holy Cats

Well since I couldn't get Frieda and Kimmers to write a collar with this title I decided to do it myself... no one was harmed in the making of this poem, written in good fun.

 

Holy cats did you just scratch my back?

Causing my passion for you to bleed,

Now the bed sheets look like a crime scene

And I am still on parole for the last heart I broke.

You are gonna get me locked up for life

While you strut around with your nine.

 

Holy cats did you have to purr like that?

Whispering the words that make me shiver,

Putting me in a position that leaves me speechless

When I was about to make an announcement.

Now I will have to choke on my words

Knowing you got the last one.

 

Holy cats you tore me up without slack

Not leaving a shred of proof

That a heart ever existed inside this chest

Thought it was beating just for you.

All I can do is stitch up the wound

As you feast on my remains.

 

Holy cats you know my ex…

Ahhhh damn now she’s got her revenge

Guess I will just walk away

With my tail between my legs

Mumbling “Holy crap.”

Reviews

[Poussiere D'Ange]

I enjoyed reading this a lot. Cats never come to any good, although i find them adorable sometimes:-):-):-D.

[L.Edward]

Cat scratch fever indeed. No cure for that, just gotta ride it out. Great imagery.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.

[lee von cleef]

Off the john, been rubbin wanting a scratch, marking my cannon bone, eyes demanding, body turning away every time I reach for you, Cradled still light "Mama-cas" old to the front door out side old or not you watched my business, watched me shake the dew off my Lilly, now go do yours ,O s**t, how do you spur me with a hind claw every time?

[ReDaYzeE]

i had fun reading this. i especially like the cat with her claws and saying holy crap!!! -- raine xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed it cause it was fun creating.

[Hannah]

Wonderful! It's rhythm is very light and fun, making a great contrast with the words. Thoroughly enjoyed this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[DIVYA]

This is one incredible write!
Very witty, full of acid humor!
Loved it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks, it was fun to create.

[PP]

Hahaha! Reminds me of that movie- My Super Ex-Girlfriend!!!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I seen that once... thank you.

[Emily Feret]

Holy cats did you have to purr like that?

Whispering the words that make me shiver,

Putting me in a position that leaves me speechless

When I was about to make an announcement.

Now I will have to choke on my words

Knowing you got the last one.

I loved this stanza!

A fun piece that is very well written. Great word choice and it flows!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Brianna Brie]

Holy Cats! Superb write! Love everything about it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweetie.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a nice play on words adding passion. Women can be much like felines that aren't domestic. They are beautiful and powerful all that the same time.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes they certainly can... tahnk you.