Long Distance Romance

a silly senryu cause I am in one of those moods :)

Hold the phone a sec,

Wait a moment for the beep

Then breathe real heavy.

Reviews

[Corset]

lol, hopefully they'll have caller Id and know it's suppose to be sexy :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LMAO... So do I :)

[SyberRose]

This is funny...well im waiting...I dont hear anything...haa..i left you a comment this morning...Didnt know if you saw it...Rose

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I got the comment on the other poem... thought I replied to that. '
Glad you found it funny cause that was the intent :)

[SyberRose]

i meant the friday message...

[Acucena G.]

Its beautifull, well done

[esperanza]

Love it =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[esperanza]

Your welcome also if you don't mind could you review one of my writings its titled "Campfire Song " but only if you want to thank you ,

[Renée]

chuckling !!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

:)

[quinfinn]

this is really realistic, imagine this on skype! hmm, hike up that skirt a little more, yeh, that's good now......

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I like the way you think.

[Shadey Jadey]

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, love it.

[Poussiere D'Ange]

Hahaha!!! Thiss was funny...it made me laugh really hard:-):-):-D.

[ape domenigoni]

Ha! Made me laugh :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good, that i what is was suppose to do.

[ape domenigoni]

:)

[Barbara Walker]

This is great! Phone sex can be awkward, what with call waiting, texts arriving...not that I have experienced it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very good points :)