Adding Character Depth

Being silly and serious seryu

 

Let’s bury the worm

So deep that the early bird

Learns about teamwork.

Reviews

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

"Let's bury the worm, before he turns"... Mine :)

(Also, the worm has turned. Even a very tolerant person will one day lose patience. For example, He bullied his assistant for years, but one day the worm turned and he walked out without notice, taking along his best clients. This expression comes from the proverb Tread on a worm and it will turn, first recorded in John Heywood's 1546 collection.)

I remember this from way-back ..lol ...
THINK I LIKE YOURS BETTER !! J. X

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much... I am honored to hear that.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

xx J.

[SyberRose]

I like silly and serious too...nice one Cowboy...Rose

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Spank you very much, I mean thank you very much :)

[SyberRose]

Wheres my whip?? haa

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I thought you were bringing it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ha! I love this, Dale! Simple senryu with a perfect message! :) (though it's not such a great deal for that early worm...)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yeah that is true... thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we all need to learn about teamwork..about giving and sharing.

nice sentiment in this piece.

well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir... you are correct.

[Renée]

lol poor worm and poor early bird...you ever see how many mouths she feeds with that one worm? Great Senryu!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... lets hope he/she shares :)

[Renée]

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[Priya]

Haha, this is so brilliant :D I love it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you.

[Tree]

One of the best from your collection, very nice Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Muse]

Very cool! The bird has been getting the worm too easy..make him work for his supper.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Damn straight.

[Angi]

Wonderful!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks.

[Ed Hart]

i think this is great cowboy

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you.