Adding Character Depth

Adding Character Depth

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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Being silly and serious seryu

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Let’s bury the worm

So deep that the early bird

Learns about teamwork.

© 2013 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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"Let's bury the worm, before he turns"... Mine :)

(Also, the worm has turned. Even a very tolerant person will one day lose patience. For example, He bullied his assistant for years, but one day the worm turned and he walked out without notice, taking along his best clients. This expression comes from the proverb Tread on a worm and it will turn, first recorded in John Heywood's 1546 collection.)

I remember this from way-back ..lol ...
THINK I LIKE YOURS BETTER !! J. X

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much... I am honored to hear that.
J.J. NIGHTINGALE

12 Years Ago

xx J.
I like silly and serious too...nice one Cowboy...Rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Spank you very much, I mean thank you very much :)
SyberRose

12 Years Ago

Wheres my whip?? haa
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

I thought you were bringing it.
Ha! I love this, Dale! Simple senryu with a perfect message! :) (though it's not such a great deal for that early worm...)

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Yeah that is true... thank you.
we all need to learn about teamwork..about giving and sharing.

nice sentiment in this piece.

well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you sir... you are correct.
lol poor worm and poor early bird...you ever see how many mouths she feeds with that one worm? Great Senryu!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you... lets hope he/she shares :)
Renée

12 Years Ago

( :
Haha, this is so brilliant :D I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Why thank you.
One of the best from your collection, very nice Dale.

Posted 12 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you sir.
Very cool! The bird has been getting the worm too easy..make him work for his supper.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Damn straight.
Wonderful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thanks.
i think this is great cowboy

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Thank you.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool



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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..