It's All Elementary

Nothing fancy, just thinking.

 

 

Fire in my heart

ignited by my passion for life.

 

Water in my soul

cleansing my sins and regrets.

 

Wind in my mind

keeping my thoughts moving.

 

Earth on my skin

reminding me where I came from.

Reviews

[Rita L. Sev]

Wonderful way to be in touch with the elements! I like this simple piece very much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I am just a simple man.

[redflutterby]

Simple but full of truth.. enjoyed this one Cowboy!! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... just some simple thoughts from a simple guy.

[redflutterby]

Your far from simple hun...rather unique and interesting! ;-)

[Marie]

The elements are truly at work in you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

They are at work for all of us. Thank you.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Fire, Water, Wind and Earth...the basic principles of life; as basic and integral to our existence as the senses. Nicely written piece with some great imagery woven in the lines. I like the seperation that you gave each element, and the flow was great too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[SyberRose]

A soulful write...and words to live by...Enjoyed very much Dale...Rose:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly Rose.

[Androglossia]

And each one is a world existing within a world. Your poem speaks of life as a whole. I liked the logic on this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, guess I was do to be logical :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this piece...life is this...nothing fancy...unless we make it that way...but i like how you broke it down to the bare elements...just a certain simplicity to existence...and that is refreshing to think about...

your poem does that...makes us go back to the basics...one with nature.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you... sometimes we just need to get back to the basics to find the true happiness of our existence.

[Eileenws]

Nice pithy poem about the elements the Lord created. I enjoyed it. Eileen

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you. Glad you liked it.