Heel For A Heel

Well my Muse has returned after a couple week missing, but does she have an attitude right now.

 

With my head between your thighs

I taste the sweet nectar

that will stimulate my heart

while poisoning my mind.

Those stilettoes are more than

just a fashion statement;

It is how you’ll stab me in the back while

wrapping me in pleasure.

It is okay with me to proceed with your plan,

cause pleasure mixed with pain

gives me a natural high.

Oh and soon my hidden agenda will soon come to light,

or had you not noticed the dirty cowboy boots

waiting for me in the corner.

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Way to end an already engaging piece... sometimes, we meet someone who has the same hidden agenda we intended for them. lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was my pleasure, bro.

[Frieda P]

Haha Dale, you DO need an attitude adjustment my friend. This was a fun read, as they say all's fair in love and war and turnaround is fair play...I guess. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Hey I don't need the Attitude adjustment, my Muse does :)
Thanks I am so glad you enjoyed the poem

[Dye]

Sexy and fun to read. Could mean a few things...the dirty boots, perhaps you were up to no good...or a reminder that "you're the man", maybe "I'll give into your needs but don't give me s**t when I head off to have my fun." Regardless...enjoyable read.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it could very well be, but I won't tell... interpreting is half the fun... so glad you enjoyed the read, it was fun to create.

[Kenneth The Poet]

As Sean Hayes said, this is powerful stuff.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh I love THIS! LMAO!
Very feisty Mister!! ;P

Well penned!...I believe your writers block just got kicked in the balls by your sexy muse!lol ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, yes I believe you are right.

[Muse]

Is this in regards to Robbie's latest? I would be careful if I was you. If a woman had to choose between a man and a closet full of shoes, I can already tell you who would win. lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No, nothing to do with her. Silly girl.

[Muse]

all this heal thrashing going around, I just thought maybe. ha ha ha

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Now don't be starting any rumors, LOL

[Muse]

no I don't need to, we all saw you trying on those shoes. ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this...it says so much without actually saying ..subtle write and the concept...of..."who is in charge"

the pleasure is hers then the pain is yours...if she decides to bring those heels down...

between a rock and a hard place...

glad you are back writing again.

jacob

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Some interesting thoughts indeed, thank you for reading and sharing.

[Sheila Kline]

So who gets who? It sounds like a steamy plan for some afternoon delight, but with a price for each to pay!
Love the idea of stilettos and cowboy boots - oh yes, high, high heels and real man!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You may be correct in that, interpreting is great.
Thank you.

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh I have not read a piece like this for awhile. It is steamy and hot. This piece is open and honest and two lovers who trust each other should be able to explore and adventure into new places.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, I liked your interpretation.