No Comparison

a senryu

 

Paper money burns,

Coins melt under too much heat,

Love rises above.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Despite the fact that I am bitterly nasty about romantic love, the power of this simple form is amazing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Glad you can appreciate it.

[Renée]

This one is smooth ! Love rises above & Love endures ! Excellent !

[emmajoy]

Clever, clever senryu, Dale... and so right, real love's worth far more than money! Amazing how much meaning a few carefully threaded words can make.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Good wisdom in those words. A excellent senryu.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[Rita L. Sev]

Money is fleeting; love is the only real wealth worth having. Great senryu, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You got that right, thank you.

[icelandicblue]

Money is spent, but love multiplies. This is a lovely poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Marie]

Love is certainly more durable than money...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So very true, and more real.

[Sheila Kline]

You just can't put a price on real LOVE!! Love conquers all - having money and not having it!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said Sheila.

[Angi]

Cowboy! Feels like everyone is broker than broke these days. Having real, honest love in your life is the important thing! Angi~

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it most certainly is, than you Angi.