Celebrate The Sin

 

Celebrate the sin

that makes the devil blush

and celebrities

to pay a fortune.

For it goes deeper than the flesh

canceling the disease in your blood.

Tainted will become

the fruits of your labor

if you listen to

divine intervention.

You must cast your stones

before they become your addiction

because swimming in

an ocean of deceit

is a no win situation.

So celebrate the sin

before it becomes

a lesson repented.

Reviews

[Blue]

Love this one, Great wordplay and great message, too. "Celebrate the sin" is an intriguing title that draws readers to read the content.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Makes me happy to hear that you enjoyed the poem, than you.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so great, I love the way you put this together. Great imagery and word choice here.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much

[Dhaye]

Honest and full of wisdom. There's a lesson in every mistake, that's what I believe.

Thanks for sharing this, cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[RichGee]

Yes! I got it...great work Cowboy....by the time we think of throwing the stones we are hooked!

[David Scott]

I felt like this was about being honest. I like how you do not condemn or judge, but state fact and consequence of denial and deceit.
True words.
You show wisdom here Cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You may be right on the topic, I will never tell. We need not judge others till we can honestly judge ourselves.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You may be right on the topic, I will never tell. We need not judge others till we can honestly judge ourselves.

[David Scott]

Ha... well, you are only promoting honesty with oneself here I think, so no need to spill the beans. ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh deceit...it will beat us...and those who pray and preach the loudest, throw the loudest stones...

do they celebrate before the fall? i think so.

a thoughtful piece, Dale.

jacob

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir

[Kenneth The Poet]

Score one for the Cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Is that with or without the extra point LOL

[redflutterby]

Celebrating sin sounds quite fun to me...lol!! Like the thoughts in this one Cowboy! ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Glad to hear that, thank you

[Rita L. Sev]

A lesson repented... heaven forbid! :) Yep, since the sin is part of who we are - make it dance!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Good call, thank you