Thoughts On The Human Spirit

 

A mechanical flow

guarantees a smooth rhythm

but a dull rhyme.

 

Life is not to be lived on a straight line,

rather maneuvering the curves

that gives a rush to

life’s meaning

that we continually chase

destined to never catch it.

 

I believe it is by design

for like the coyote

chasing the road runner

it gives us a continual purpose.

 

In our journey

we will sometimes

travel down a broken road.

 

Let that be an inspiration

in building a spiritual bridge

to the hope and faith

that waits deep within the heart

for that voyage

to the promise land.

 

Try to appreciate

The things that come easily

by remembering

those losses you curse

in the act of blaming God

instead of giving fate

a helping hand.

 

For if the almighty one

made it simple

complacency would become

a fad that would never fade,

and A heart devoid of humanity

Is a porthole to hell.

 

Reviews

[Traci]

Again so much wisdom in your work, leaves one pondering. If life were easy, and the path was straight we'd never learn nor appreciate anything. It is life's challenges that offer growth, give us strength, and a deeper appreciation for humanity. Your positivism shines in this piece sweet poet, setting an example for all to follow. Lovely work!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, also funny when I hear wisdom when describing my work. I am a simple man express what I have learned from life.

[Fran Marie]

such truth and wisdom within the lines of this poem....penned excellence !!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, not sur how wise I am, just speaking what life has taught me.

[Marie]

You are right. The easy, straight roat is not always the most profitable or the most inspirational. There are no straight lines in Nature.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the review and sharing your thoughts.

[DIVYA]

"In our journey

we will sometimes

travel down a broken road.



Let that be an inspiration

in building a spiritual bridge

to the hope and faith

that waits deep within the heart

for that voyage

to the promise land."

With these lines, you tell me never to lose the faith and that there IS a rainbow at the end, however, faded or obscure it may seem for now...Dale your are the best philosophical writer and thinker on WC!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow that is quite a compliment, you made my night, not sure I am the best but thank you. Yes that is what I am saying bout faith.

[DIVYA]

You are most welcome Dale. Well I am sure. What I like is the simplicity and clarity with which you convey your intended message, without elaborate trimming and yet so beautifully.

[LadyAnn68]

Oh you have definitely captured the truth here! I appreciate every thought here...excellent write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, that makes me happy to hear.

[redflutterby]

Words that come from a kind and positive heart. You share of yourself with such pure generosity. Your spirit and thoughts touch many in this wonderful poem. Truth lives within it... One that should be embraced by many.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much for your thoughts and a very high compliment.

[David Scott]

I like the support of humanity in this poem. So often it seems we devalue the human spirit. In this poem I see a reality check without negativity.
Great philosophy Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Glad to hear that, I try to avoid negativity… sadly negativity spreads faster than positivity.Thank you for your time and perspective.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

geez, Dale....now i know why i never catch life's meaning...i keep using those "ACME" products...

meep meep...

i really like this metaphor...because the real meaning isn't in some poem's perfect construct..

it is free verse feeling....stepping out of one's comfort zone.

damn good poem to read this morning.

jacob

[Glen Yumang Manese]

reads like a a bible study...
a reflective piece in the lines...
about life itself and the order of things...
being a man of faith...
this adds perspective...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...