Heartabomb

A senryu

 

I can hear a bomb

Ticking inside of my chest

Bringing me new life.

Reviews

[April Child]

Bombs make a big mess and once they go off there's no going back. New life indeed. Nice poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you… I am actually referring to the new heart vales I had replaced recently, I can hear them ticking in the quiet.

[Renée]

This one makes me smile.. I can see two visions..one being the obvious..i hear a new respect for the heart.. also could be a new feeling of love.. Great senryu Cowboy !

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It don't matter how you integrate it, cause anything you take from it is right.

[Renée]

very diplomatic lol ( :

[DIVYA]

Awesome and deep. When we face a bomb, the we realize how precious life is. Amazing lines Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks sweetie, I appreciate the sentiment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

hope your valves are working well, and you feel rejuvenated...

you already have such a big heart...it is evident through your poetry.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you kind sir… and I feel better then ever, more energy than I ever had.

[Marie]

I'm thinking you had a heart transplant?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No, Two valves replaced though.

[redflutterby]

Positive and unigue way of portraying what youve been through. Yep...that heart has a new lease on life. Treat it well hun!! xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I also hope it is metaphorical for other things too.

[redflutterby]

I hope so too....and I'm so glad youre here!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, that is sweet of you to say