Different Shades Of Senryu Part II

Emma Joy thought I should do more senryus so I took the challenge

 

A Senryu On Evolution

 

Don’t drag your knuckles,

We evolved for a reason,

To keep our hands clean.

 

 

A Senryu On Advertising

 

So your medicine

Stops the cough but can cause death?

I’ll stick with hacking.

 

 

A Senryu On Technology

 

Technology helps

The world run faster without

The human factor.

 

 

A Senryu on War

 

If you want bloodshed

Let your elected minions

Paint hell crimson red.

Reviews

[s y e]

You're like the boss at Senryu's! :-) I loved them all, but the last one done it for me.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much young lady.

[Marie]

I really like them all, especially the last. You're very good at senyrus.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, I find them a fun challenge.

[Frieda P]

Wow Dale, not sure which one I like best, they're all so awesome. Kudos, really affecting Senryus. *cough* ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Moonbeam, they are a fun challenge to come up with.

[Frieda P]

They really are challenging...you got all the ducks in a row. quack. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Maybe so but they still drive me quakers. LOL

[Frieda P]

Hahah you're like goosey lucy. ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I thought I was Cheesy Chester, LOL

[Frieda P]

Depends on the moment in time....got a few more for you too haha

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hehe… hoho… harhar

[Frieda P]

You know they always say the kid with the most nicknames is most loved, but you know sometimes they're just wrong. hah ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That must be why I only gave you only one nickname :p

[Frieda P]

OUCH.........!

[Chris]

Laughing in the light of your truths...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well we got to be able to laugh at life sometimes or it will drive us insane.

[emmajoy]

Should have known you'd rise to the challenge! This is obviously a great genre for you, Dale, you have the knack of finding the senryu's core then wrap it with intelligence and/or humour. Really like the Technology one, has a certain bite to it. Bravo!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks classy lady. has a bite to it? Watch your fingers, LOL… Glad to hear that you enjoyed them, they are a fun challenge to do sometimes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Emma Joy had the "write" idea...keep them coming...you are wise in what you "right"----these kick a*s, Dale.

especially relate to the technology one.

politicians don't keep their hands clean, so they must walk on their knuckles...as they paint our hell crimson...without the human factor of heart, and i just can't stop coughing...but the side effects of the medicine...definitely worse.