Tell Me… (Spring Breeze)

 

 

Tell me your thoughts

On any subject the universe ponders,

I will open the vault to my mind

For I know that your brain

Will fill it

With intellectual gems.

 

Tell me how you feel

About any topic that moves you,

I will believe in your emotions

Without hesitation

Cause despite your imperfections

I know you are true of heart.

 

Whenever we converse

You are a spring breeze

Blowing the remaining snow

Off my wintered soul.

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Whenever we converse
You are a spring breeze
Blowing the remaining snow
Off my wintered soul.

I know someone like this. Most refined of love poems.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

To know someone like this is a heavenly gift.
Thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

It is ………..

[Marie]

Some people are so refreshing to talk to. They set old thoughts flowing in new channels.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Those are the kind of people that make great lifetime companions.

[Corset]

I truly enjoyed this piece, it's simple but extremely romantic, every girl (or guy I think too) wants to be talked to (not just at them) them as an equal, and if they don't understand what is being discussed, then teach with patience and not condensendingly! lol, then they will know too, the secrets of the universe! Exploration of mind is the most fascinating thing couples can do, In my humble opinion. I love this write. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much for your thoughts and wonderful review. So glad you liked it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this piece also Dale...but did trip on that same line Chris did...not exactly sure how to read it...or whether you meant something else instead.
the last two lines are so so strong.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I swear their are Gremlins in my spell check, LOL Thank you sir.

[Chris]

1st stanza - "For I know that for I know your brain" - ?

this one line lost me... the rest read well - aloud.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir, I will check it out.