Novicain Lips Numbs The Senseless

 

That first impression

Made a hardened mold

Till the words that came from

Your stretched lips

Drooled onto the ground,

Causing a slip and fall

Into a pool of

Moral dilemma.

 

Now that you have a broken bite

Your bark is getting caught

In your throat

Making freedom of speech

A bitter pill to swallow.

 

When you eventually choke

To death on the human factor

You’ll begin to understand

How it feels choking

On a taste of your own medicine.

Reviews

[Marie]

THat's very strong stuff. I like your allusions, We need to be careful of our words. Someday we may have to eat them.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much for your input.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

those who judge others will eventually choke on their own morality...and do eternal penance for being so damn judgmental...

to err is human, but some forget that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That they do, I once saw a bumper sticker that said, "If you think you are perfect try walking on water."

[icelandicblue]

Sounds like karma's in town and she is pissed at someone. I like the imagery in this a lot.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

They don't say Karma can be a b***h for nothing.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

I am sorry for the uncouthness of my speech here ... but Damn, Cowboy...get em! There was quite a bite to this piece and I have to say I love it! lol... nicely done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow, thank you for that enthusiastic response. Glad I can move someone like that.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

:P haha it was a brilliant write... sorry I couldn't express that better, lol.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You expressed it just fine :)