The Human Psyche(Not An Exact Science)

The Human Psyche(Not An Exact Science)

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
"

My mind is a roller coaster flying off the tracks

"

 

The paradigm of ones

Mental state

Is a fragile thing.

One shift in the fault line

That is over thinking

Can create phantom friends…

 

Ghostly influences

Can turn your mind

Into thin air…

 

The heavy burden

Of trying to breathe

New life in to

Sunken aspirations

Becomes the anchor

That won’t let you

Row ashore…

 

Without the power

To walk on water

Just inhale your faith

And let the inner angel

Take flight.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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This piece is very beautiful, nicely written.

Kaze~ :-D

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Thank you again.
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

11 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
I cannnot regulate my thoughts, though I try. Like Jacob, my is everywhere. I try to make up for it by severly controling my life in other ways.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

That makes a lot of sense. Thank you for sharing.
that's what i call pinning the tail on the donkey...it's like looking in the mirror...good 'en

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Well thank you kindly good sir.
oh geez, does this not fit me exactly right now...so many things going on i want to wish away...take flight...certain burdens of worry that just tire me out...

i relate to this too much...but damn it's good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Thank you, glad to see someone relates to it.
This is genious, it makes perfect sense,

"One shift in the fault line
That is over thinking
Can create phantom friends"

And then the title is nice

How when kids are influenced to open the door to imaginary friends, where it all gets started

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Ahhh you make a very fine point. thank you for sharing your thoughts and I am glad you liked it.
This is a really positive, insightful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Thank you hon, that is what I was hoping it would be.
Confused? With what aspects? People? Emotions? Sorry, sometimes asking questions is easier to do. LOL

Your title...did you mean psyche?

Upon reading your last verse I remember the song "LET IT BE".

I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the share.



Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

First off thanks for catching the error… Glad I could confuse you, that means you are thinking :) .. read more
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

LOL. You're glad to confuse someone? But I'm not. I asked you if YOU"RE confused of anything based o.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Oh I gotcha now, besides I was just kidding with you :)
I am glad you enjoyed the piece :)

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..