Darwins Underground, Unrelenting and Undeniable Menagerie

If you think you know, think again

 

Something ominous

Has rattled my cage

That I have been trying to

Keep out of the spotlight

Of this Big Top Menagerie;

         The lock is only made of ice.

Once  this invisible entity

Creates a spark in my dark side

The animal within has no choice

But to burn the superficial circus

To the ground

To rid the world

Of the things that

         Can’t ever be seen…

                  Should never be heard…

                           Will never be spoken…

For I am

         The untamed lion,

                  The loyal wolf,

                           And the sacrificial lamb.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Gotta get those paws, claws and hooves in the mud, have a kick around and see if the truth appears - so many take face value in life - liked this x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

ThaNK you so much Magic heart for imparting your wisdom.

[s y e]

Your poems are so good and can be interpreted in anyway, which is what I like about them... You can never be wrong. You're last stanza just hits the bullseye.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you… that is what I want… I always say it doesn't matter what I intended but rather what the reader gets from it.

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That was deep - For I am

The untamed lion,

The loyal wolf,

And the sacrificial lamb

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly sir.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Welome:)))))))))))))))))))))) You going to have to give this sir up thow lol:) Sir is like putting a name on an outhouse it just don't work lol:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I've heard that before… I gotcha, that is like someone calling me a gentleman.

[Marie]

I'm not sure what this means, but I really like the last three lines...they tell a story all by themselves...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It can mean anything you take from it wether it is what I intended. Appreciate the feedback.

[Renée]

I don't pretend to know, but I know today.. this touches me personally, I feel every sentence and I am every word...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, it means a lot that you connect with my words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

being a combination of all of those, no easy responsibility...being one to rid the world of what needs to be gone..and there are so many things.
a good rant...because society is such a mess...there seems so little hope things will get better.

poets can roar, much like the beats did way back...but can we change what us?
at least we can make some more aware.

i really like both of these new writes from you...

your political comment is so rational...and at times understated but in a severe way that makes us uncomfortable..which is a necessary and good thing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you very much sir… sometimes we can not sugar coat things or societies ignorance will be overweight and lazy.