Thinking in Senryu

Some thoughts in Senryu form.

My Insight Senryu 1

 

Try to serve revenge

Like a cold dish can lead to

Being the main course.

 

 

My Insight Senryu 2

 

Seeing more stars in

The country proves simple life

Has more happiness.

 

 

My Insight Senryu 3

 

No matter how strong

Any relationship is

It is still fragile.

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Some excellent insight, Rock and Roll.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much. I try.

[Marie]

Very good insights. I especially like the first.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such profound insight...especially love the second one...i live in the woods, in the country...nothing like it...especially since i lived so many years in or near a city, in Bronx and near Chicago...

jacob

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it is quite a difference, I would love to be living in the country someday.

[Marie]

I did live in the country once, and it had many advantages. But the city is my homw.

[MagicAl]

Like them all but love the third! All are well written and meaningful :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

These are all great, Dale - #2 is a lovely image!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[Fran Marie]

all three seem to be right on the money almost like reading a proverb, you have a keen insight ....I especially liked senryu 2 ....I agree..Nice WorK!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.