Heat Of The Moment

I believe that we love someone for many things they are, but there is one moment that makes us fall in love with them.

 

I never truly knew

The meaning of

“Heat of the moment”

till just one spark

inspired my heart

when I heard

the passion in your verse.

Now you’ve become the poem

That I want to read

Over and over again

So I can discover

All that lies between the lines,

For I know you can turn my life

Into an epic story.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very right cowboy.Sometimes there is just a moment when it hits you that you love this person.This is lovely my friend :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, appreciate your review.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome :)

[Marie]

You're right. There is that one moment when you know. I like the poetry analogy you've given this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Dhaye]

Hey, cowboy. This poem of yours reminds me of a song entitled "Love Moves In Mysterious Ways".
Sometimes it comes in an unexpected place and time.
I can relate to this piece.
Well-done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I am gonna have to find that song now and take a listen. I was actually listening to a song when I ams up with it. "Everything You Do(You're Sexing me)"

[Pryde Foltz]

Now you’ve become the poem
That I want to read
Over and over again

What is it about certain people that spark our interest like so few other can do. Great metaphor work.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Not sure, that is the mystery of love and the human psyche… thank you very much.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

That spark that inspires hearts is truly what we all want and wait for. I love how you have put this love into a metaphor of a poem...for all of us writers here do love a good poem, and the passion we feel when reading one that ignites our hearts, what could depict love better than that? This is a simply beautiful piece that the hopeless romantic in me just applauds, well done, Cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much sweetie… you know I am a hopeless romantic too and he thank you too.

[Brianna Brie]

Your poems descriptive line catches my attention. That moment is a memorable one. The imprint is never forgotten. Enjoyed reading your poem :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, always love hearing from you.

[lost girl]

mmmmmmm, now this is sweet!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you, I can be sweet on occasion. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and you have absolutely captured that moment here...

we just know...there is an epiphany of thematic existence, when we hear the words, get that look...and there it is...

i really like your part about "the poem that i want to read over and over again"

nicely done, Dale....you always capture emotions so well...we can digest your poems and then be left with an aftertaste that makes us so glad we consumed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again, yeah I really like when that line came to me.