2 For 1(An Angelic Special)

2 For 1(An Angelic Special)

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
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A senryu for you

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Your inner beauty

Compliments the gorgeous view;

Double breathtaking.

 

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)


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Filled with poetry and music, and the music of poetry, with the ability to express it what could make a better lover than the arts?

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

I like the way you think. Thank you.
Very nice senyru. At first I thought you had too many syllables, but reading it closely, I see that you did it perfectly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Thank you, oh yes I read them out loud many times while counting syllable before posting.
i love this idea, so simple but so profound...the view includes both inner beauty and outer beauty...and sometimes the latter can fool us...we see only with our eyes...and what is there can lead us to a false paradise.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Yes you are so correct. Thanks again.
Glad that you can see the inner view of someone. Double celebration. lol.
Well-penned senryu, Sir.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Wow what a beautiful senryu... the "for you" this is written for is a lucky person to have such a lovely piece dedicated to them. Always enjoy your talented heartfelt expressions...well done, Cowboy! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Why thank you very much, it pleases me that the poem pleased you.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..