2 For 1(An Angelic Special)

A senryu for you

 

Your inner beauty

Compliments the gorgeous view;

Double breathtaking.

 

Reviews

[Corset]

Filled with poetry and music, and the music of poetry, with the ability to express it what could make a better lover than the arts?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I like the way you think. Thank you.

[Marie]

Very nice senyru. At first I thought you had too many syllables, but reading it closely, I see that you did it perfectly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, oh yes I read them out loud many times while counting syllable before posting.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this idea, so simple but so profound...the view includes both inner beauty and outer beauty...and sometimes the latter can fool us...we see only with our eyes...and what is there can lead us to a false paradise.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes you are so correct. Thanks again.

[one sky]

Glad that you can see the inner view of someone. Double celebration. lol.
Well-penned senryu, Sir.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Wow what a beautiful senryu... the "for you" this is written for is a lucky person to have such a lovely piece dedicated to them. Always enjoy your talented heartfelt expressions...well done, Cowboy! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you very much, it pleases me that the poem pleased you.