Lifebeat

 

I hear my life

Ticking away;

But it is not the sound

Of a clock counting down,

Rather a rhythm of love

I have for all those

Who bless my life.

Reviews

[Chidoriflower]

Very lovely. It's short and sweet. Reminds me of a mechanic heartbeat, very much alive but still a bit sad when you realize everyone's going to die....But the rhythm of love, I believe, can transcend even the powers of death.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for sharing your insight.

[Madalyn Beck]

I love this. The clock is ticking down, yet you look on the bright side of the time passing. The ones we love dearly. Short, simple, yet beautiful. Great write! (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much. The ticking actually refers to the metal heart valves I have. I can hear them all day and especially at night when I try to sleep. But I look on the positive side that it is better then being dead.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the positiveness of this piece...the glass definitely is half full always, not half empty..

the time that is already gone we treasure...and those moments yet to come, we treasure even moreso and make most use of them.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir for your kind words.

[one sky]

I always say, what is life without love? Love is life for it is the reason why we live. We are truly blessed when we are surrounded with kind and loving people.

Short but relevant, sir. Kudos!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I agree wholeheartedly. Thank you for reading and laving you wonderful insight.

[Marie]

Very nice. We are all blessed with such a sound if we only listen...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

So true Marie. Thanks.

[Ladysue]

Dale this is perhaps the most beautiful words I have read. I love that sound..'rhythm of love'..this touched me..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thanks tiny dancer xoxo