Born With Class

A royal senryu

 

If you were my queen

No crown would make you special,

You already are.

Reviews

[Star]

Short but it really does get the point across. Wonderfully done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Marie]

Great senyru. A love poem I actually like.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Madalyn Beck]

Seeing someone as special for who they are and no other reason. Beautiful. (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much sweetie.

[Dhaye]

The addressee of this poem is so lucky that the speaker knows how to see her special qualities.
Beautiful senryu!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much hon.

[Megan]

Class is sexy. Just saying. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes it is indeed, thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

royalty doesn't protect us or make us any better than who we already are...i like this...because without the crown and gowns and whatever...she already is a queen, inside.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

What a beautiful write, about how a special lady should be viewed...you are one of the rare ones who know how to treat a woman.... keep that golden heart, Cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweets, just too bad women don't want a nice guy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i found that is often the case...Dale...sometimes the meaner some guys treat women, the more they like them...makes no sense does it?

[Ghost of Jupiter]

LOL...Okay listen you two... if a lady prefers a mean and abusive bad boy, then you do not want to be with her anyway, because there is obviously something wrong there. A real woman knows the value of a nice guy and would settle for nothing less. Lets not forget that... lol...okay I am done...continue on with your poetry...hahaha :P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you hon for that wonderful advice. I know you are a real woman.