You Spy, I Spy(A Romantic Mystery)

 

I don’t mind you stalking me

         Cause you are no creep,

 

                  But a beautiful angel

                  Blessing me with your heart so sweet.

 

And you are certainly no weirdo,

 

         Just a gentle being

         Making me believe I am interesting.

 

I love when I see your footprints

         Near my window;

 

Cause it lets me know you find me special

         Which is a miracle to me,

 

         What you failed to notice

                  Is that I was mesmerized by you;

 

         Peaking at you through

                  The hole in my heart.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

This is beautiful. Mutual stalkers - Hahaha! Now there's something you don't see every day! (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LMAO, you sure don't,I was being playful… I was thinking of how some people admire one another but think the other doesn't like them so they both miss out on something special.

[Madalyn Beck]

Hahaha! Very similar in a way. The desire but the never moving forward. I really liked this write! (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank s again, that means a lot to me.

[Aethereal]

And so, the Phantom morphs into a cat who stalks you leaving mysterious footprints behind. Perhaps "Blessing me with your heart so sweet" could be stated as " Blessing me with your inquisitive essence". Any sentence with "so "---"“ at its end may be rewritten in another way. I'm always reading "so "--"“ in the poetry on this site, but I never use this phrase myself.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh the Phantom is one of my favorite books of all time. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! If you're into "stalking" then you're into Phantoms, and Shadow People.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Stalkers both of you I think lol.This is great Cowboy :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks hon, I was just being playful with my words while trying to be sweet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You did it to perfection.You are welcome :)

[Dhaye]

How do you know that someone is stalking? Anyway, if both of you are spying each other, then you must be both playful. lol. How exciting for you two!

This is something interesting. And you are playing with your structure, too. Nice presentation of your thoughts.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sweetie, yes I was meaning it in a playful way. You know how two people notice each other but don't realize the other is really interested in them too.

[gabrielle]

Ah, two people stalking each other. =). Stalking is never sweet unless we are also interested with the stalker.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I wasn't really talking bout a true stalker, it was meant in a playful way… thank you so much.

[Yellow Butterfly]

"Peaking at you through the hole in my heart".....wow... this line really blew me away.

YB

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

haha...well knowing your stalker stories...this is rather funny. Very sweet as well. You are a tender hearted poet. Adore the last lines...reminds me of the hearts with the key hole shape in them, very sweet thought indeed. Wonderfully written as usual, Cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe why thank you on, you flatter me so making me feel like a butterfly flying on a spring breeze.

[David Scott]

I like this Dale.
We observe each other in many ways.
How often do we feel unwelcome or overstepping our boundaries?
We should learn to embrace our interactions with true transparency.
Interesting indeed!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You know I think of how many times I missed out on an opportunity cause I didn't try.
Thank you kindly sir.

[Megan]

Awe. Hehe. So cute. I'm jealous. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is creepy in a way but really romantic in a way also...

i was singing an old New Colony Six song as i read it..."Can't you See me Cry"

"as i spend my hours looking at your window"
as you say "Peeking at you through /the hole in my heart"---

love that...that peephole in my heart.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir… wasn't intending creepy but that is cool, I was going for playful :)
Glad you liked it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i meant "creepy" in a funny sort of way...not "CREEPY" in a ugh sort of way..

your playfulness worked well, my friend.