If The Stars Ever Blackout

Unconditionally

 

If there was a power surge

From all the hate in my universe

Causing a blackout of the stars

In my world,

I know there would still be

The light of the moon by my side;

For the love we share

Is not of this world;

Therefore giving me a place to stay

That will not weigh down

My anxieties and fears,

Allowing them to drift away

Into a dark eternal abyss

Until the sun rises

To warm my heart with hope.

 

If there is ever a power surge

In your universe

From too many lies and neglect

Causing the stars in your world

To blackout,

Just know I would gladly be your moon,

For you have always been

The sun that brightens my soul.

Author's Note

Whenever I lose my hope in humanity all I have to do is think of you to restore my faith.

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Dale..this is a love poem that moved my universe..truly inspiring and beautiful..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks tiny dancer, your kind words mean a lot to me :)

[MsJewel]

He is her moon...she is his sun....
such beautiful thoughts and emotions surrounding this poem.
Soft, sweet and romantic...Perfect!

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, yes I am a hopeless romantic deep down.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Oh wow, this is simply beautiful... to have that unconditional love and respect for another soul...to be their moon in a starless sky, pulling them back into hope... a gorgeous thought and write, Cowboy. Your heart illuminates these words brilliantly.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe shucks hon, that is so sweet of you to say, what is it you can make me blush so easily?

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Guess I just have a knack for it...lol ;P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I can't argue with that :)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is such a positive love poem, the caring shines through brighter than many moons put together.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you again sir, appreciate the kind feedback.

[icelandicblue]

Simply beautiful...they read like wedding vows. There is true love in your words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wedding vows, that is interesting way of seeing it, thank you.

[Lily Mae]

My God..this is so up my universe.. I just love it. This kind of love and devotion is what it's all about.. Thank you for sharing your heart and soul..xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… I know it is the kind of love and devotion I want and feel I deserve, thanks wild one. xo

[Manu Rivera]

Let`s be realistic, let's do the impossible.

[Dhaye]

So sweet and beautiful! You're both blessed having each other-- because she has you who appreciates her importance; because you have her who brightens your life

"Whenever I lose my hope in humanity all I have to do is think of you to restore my faith." I once said that to a friend and always think of it though I don't always say.

"For you have always been
The sun that brightens my soul." ---Familiar lines from a friend who considered someone as his light.

This piece reminds me of some other things. Indeed whenever we lose hope in this world, there will only be one who can make us stand still with faith...

So relevant and impressive. Keep it up, cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I don't really have anyone at this point, just dreaming of how I would like things to be with someone. But no doubt if I love someone I am loyal to them and give all I have.
Thank you so much for the kind review.

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awwww this is so lovely cowboy Dale.I hope she understands how special she is to you :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much hon, appreciate the sweet sentiment.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Madalyn Beck]

This is soooooo sweet, Dale!! Your heart beats of unconditional love and hope. I love this!! Great write!! (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you Maddy. I always love when you enjoy my words.