Dangerous But Worth The Risk

Getting frisky with a senryu

 

Your dangerous curves

Are worth the risk in taking

A ride to heaven.

Reviews

[s y e]

I really liked this and it shows that not every guy wants a skinny woman. That there is chance for woman who actually have a little more on their body and that they can be loved....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Like I say bones are for dogs and skelatons are not sexy. Beauty comes in all forms and what is inside that matters, but yes I do really enjoy real women who have curves.

[s y e]

Why can't every guy think like you? Us girls/woman wouldn't be so depressed about ourselves if we had more support... ha.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I agree, I blame more of the media for making people think that skinny is sexy.

[s y e]

Yep, couldn't agree more. The media has a lot to answer for these days.

[Marie]

I like this senyru....but I don't quite get out of it what Jacob did. I see it just as a titillating little poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Marie, that is all I intended, I think it is cool when others take more from my poems.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this because it has double meaning...a physical attraction yes...but also...how we face the challenges and curves in our lives, and how the risk of doing what is right is worth it to get where we hope to go..physically, emotionally and spiritually...

nicely done.

jacob

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh wow I like that, taking this simple poem to a more complexed level, you are making me feel smart.

[redzone]

Are you sure it's just the senyru you are getting frisky with??? Me thinks yon curvy woman needs to watch out for your senyrus.....
~~redzone

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, I believe you are right good sir.

[redflutterby]

Lol...where did you get that pic of me??? ;-)
Frisky and fun senryu...and you like curves...a man after my own heart!! xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yeah, as I told Maddy on the review below bones are for dogs and skeletons are not sexy.
Thank you so much

[Madalyn Beck]

A sweet and sensual write!! Curvy women are nice. Great write! (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again sweets… you are correct, bones are for dogs and skeletons are not sexy, even on Halloween, LOL