You Are Write For Me

How can I put into words

What I feel about 

The ink that flows from your pen?

When past reviews on your poetic soul

By guys with no artistic class

Causes you to doubt your abilities

And question whether my verses of affection

Could easily be erased;

Not that I blame you one bit

When another’s abuse of the English language

Was so smooth that you slipped

With nothing to break your fall

But the heart on your sleeve,

That took the brunt of the damage.

 

Shall I write in my private journal,

Repeating the words that ring true

About how deeply I feel for you,

For I wear mine on my sleeve too.

For you it is an open book to read any chapter you like;

May one day you comprehend what is between the lines

To see what is truer than fiction,

That your heart is a book too valuable

To be put on a shelf collecting dust,

Rather to be held closely to my chest

Cause it is perfectly clear that your soul is right for mine.

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

You have a golden heart Cowboy, this is simply the sweetest most endearing poem... You have captured what makes you such a unique and sincere kind soul and put it into beautiful words. Wonderful heartfelt write.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again... You're far too sweet to me.

[Fran Marie]

a beautiful piece...lots of deep feelings written quite nicely
in poetic expression....Great Pen!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Fran, it is nice to see you have returned to the cafe.

[Fran Marie]

7hanks Dale...been having some computer problems off and on...but I do get online as of lately

[Bright Ocean Star]

Awwee, Dale, this is so sweet and beautiful. I love this! She's a lucky lady. Great write, as always. You have a truly gifted grasp of the English poetic language. Be well....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much that is so sweet of you to say.

[Bright Ocean Star]

You are welcome...

[Jennie Baron]

Another great expression of both affection and respect. I certainly echo what you and Jacob say below. I absolutely know that when I met my guy he helped me believe in myself again.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh that is so awesome to hear. Love is happiness.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

to love someone so much, to help them to believe in themselves again...

this is the definition of love...those journals are proof, she owns your heart.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I do believe it is the definition of love too, thank you sir for the input.

[s y e]

Holy schmokes Dale!! This is out of this world good, dude -- You've totally blown me away here. The wording is written to perfect (obviously) To feel this much passion and love for someone is truly magnificent and rare. Absolutely adore this! xoxo

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you sweet Sye, you keep complimenting me like this and I am gonna have to believe in myself.

[s y e]

I think you need to believe in yourself, my sweet friend. Why wouldn't you?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I do actually, just trying to be funny to shed off the blushing I was doing :)

[s y e]

Hahaha, okay well if you keep blushing you're going to be redder than a tomato! Just sayin'.

[redflutterby]

Sigh.... who is this lucky lady??? Private journals eh??? Well whoever you write about I hope shes as sweet and fun as you!! Awwww.... ;-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe why thank you for such sweet sentiment you express.

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow!! Dale, this is amazing! I adore this piece you have and it is going in my favorites!! To feel like that for someone is one of the most beautiful things!! Fantastic!! xo (:

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh wow, than k you so much, not just for the kind review but putting it in your favs. That is the ultimate compliment.

I know that when a heart is jaded it takes the right heart to unbreak it. It may take time and patience but worth it in the end.

[~]

Wow, such an open poem that spills out your heart and soul. I feel like a richer person for have stumbled upon this treasure.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so kindly, that is sweet of you to say.

[~]

You are welcome... it was a pleasure to have read such awesome poetry.

[Holly Mason]

Holy snaps and a hand shake....that was truely lovely
Beatiful lines fine rock and roll sir

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh why thank you so much Holly… appreciate you kind words, so nice to see you in the cafe.