Hunger Pains

Dr Seuss is haunting my muse

First you painted my blue

Then you made me feel new,

Next you wore me like a shoe

Just to fix me with glue,

Oh what am I to do

With the likes of you,

Invite you to my dining room

So I can eat you like stew.

Reviews

[MagicAl]

Upbeat and somewhat comical..love it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Cool, I am glad to hear that.

[Iika]

This is just so happy, bubbly and alive. Made me smile.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[s y e]

Ha, this is the cutest kind of love in the world. You're so in love you just wanna savour every inch of them. Sigh.... So sweet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much Sye, as always you are too sweet.

[Kenneth Stephen Goodpas..]

I love this bit. This has character, charm, and form. I especially love "Dr Seuss is haunting my muse" I enjoy reading a witty poem that rhymes and is not a string of words with no meter or form. TWO THUMBS UP!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… actually I prefer to write non rhyming poems but this one got stuck in my head.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of words my friend. I had to read again. Thank you for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for taking time to read it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god, what a smile this is, Dale...

needed some light fare tonight...

sometimes we love someone so much we simply want to eat them up...figuratively and literally...

thanks for this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir, sometimes I like to entertain people with my words while making them think.