Holy Water

 

Moonbeams dance

On a restless body of water,

Causing the ripples

To appear as halos;

These images

Are neither an illusion

Nor a miracle,

Just nature’s way

Of showing faith

In its creator.

 

Two lovers sit in a boat

Marveling at the mystical sight

Not realizing the meaning of it all,

Yet subconsciously

Giving their approval

By kissing in the midst

Of this magic moment.

Reviews

[~]

This is a beautifully romantic piece that shows a hopeless romantic heart in the author. I can see the images you paint well, lovely writing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I appreciate the wonderful review of my work.

[Mary]

This is so beautiful- I sense a subtle cause and effect woven throughout- flow of spirit and love and a kiss. Just beautiful!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Blue]

Aww. I like the inclusion of lovers in the poem. It added to the magical beauty of the scenario. I'm always in awe of your work, Dale... Keep it up!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much, that is sweet of you to say.

[Blue]

Is it a surprise? I'm sweet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well ummm, I will take the fifth on that, LOL

[Blue]

Haha. Silly you! I miss you, though. Glad to be back.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Glad to see you back her :)))

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awwww this is so beautiful Cowboy Dale.Made a girl sigh that it did :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ahhh well it makes me smile to know it did that.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well you made me sigh I made you smile not a bad days work lol

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I so agree :))

[Lyn Anderson]

A lovely soulful spiritual piece. NOW, you know me, so I must point out it's is its, sans apostrophe.:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much :)))

[Meliss@k]

mmmmm.
Literally. have no words for this. such beauty that i'm speechless.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow thank you so much, I am flattered that my words could render someone speechless.

[Rita L. Sev]

Beautiful, Dale. This poem refreshes the soul.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Rita hearing that made me smile.

[Marie]

That's lovely...ripples on the water like halos...making magic vor lovers...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Marie.

[David Scott]

If a priest can make plain waters holy then two lovers most definitely can!
I enjoyed the picture you framed and detailed so well with so few words..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well said sir, very well said. Thank you.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so sweet poem, brilliant description of the waters..My favorite element! It`s really powerful and contain the symbol of desire and love. I like your style and beautiful imagery... like how you divide the poem into 2 parts, an introduction with vivid picture of waters...and a love scene. My favorite lines are the end of both:
Just nature’s way
Of showing faith
In it’s creator.

By kissing in the midst
Of this magic moment.

{sugar plum}
June-014

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very kindly for that awesome review.