Skinny Dip

 

Please shed those

Binding clothes

And come skinny dip

In my epiphany pool,

Cause the water is clear,

With you in it

Would make it crystal pure.

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I was always taught that to have an epiphany was to suddenly see something in a new way. Going skinny dipping would surely do that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I believe it would, thank you sir.

[KWP]

:) this makes me smile .... and oohhh the thought of an epiphany pool is just delightful ... to enter into anothers soul, just because it is there ... :0

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, appreciate your kindness.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Beautiful words about unwrapping your soul and letting it be free with one another, wonderful work as always, Cowboy.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much… I am flattered by your review.

[Marie]

Very nice, but I would suggest that the next to last line should be "And you in it"....I think that would make more sense.

[Lyn Anderson]

Mmmm, thought it was going to be sexy, and instead it's more romantic. I guess you squeaked by without the MATURE slap.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, you can slap my anyways, LOL

[s y e]

And a holy wow from this side of the world. What a poem and what a metaphor. I am totally with Jacob on this one... Loved it all.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much sweet Sye

[jacob erin-cilberto]

talk about use of metaphors....

i really like what you did with this one...

"skinny dip in my pool" in other words, undress your heart and let it swim with mine, totally naked in the sense of sharing everything.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sir.