My Definition Of A Worldly Woman

What's got into me… oh yeah, you.

 

Your creativity

Gives my imagination

Something to inspirationally derive.

 

Your heart

Has given mine

Faith in mankind’s good side.

 

Your mind

Puts my brain

Into intellectual hyperdrive.

 

Your face

Comforts my eyes

Like a warm bed at night.

 

Your legs

Revs up my libido

Like a V8 engine in overdrive.

 

You can break my heart,

That is fine with me,

I will just turn the shattered pieces

Into a diamond ring

To wear on your finger.

 

Reviews

[Namrata]

I loved the last stanza, can't overlook it for sure

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Rita L. Sev]

Nice! I love that last stanza, Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you so much, I believe we were reviewing each other at the same time.

[Rita L. Sev]

Ooh! Cosmic poet crossing! :)

[David Scott]

Ha! Love this. Use me please!
Men are so easy...
I think I'll get in the jewelry business. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

LOL, too funny, thank you sir… yes we are easy aren't we.

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

A nice sentimental poem. I like the lay out.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so kindly.

[Tree]

Had to smile when I read this. Especially, that last metaphor. A poem that is rich, with sincere romantic sentiment.

Thanks for sharing this one, D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for the kind comment :)

[Marie]

She sounds like a woman of the world to me. I especially like the last verse.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Marie

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Sounds like a ZZ-Top song Dale I love it:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Now that is an awesome compliment, I love ZZ TOP

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I knew ya dig that Dale!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Worldly Woman Hmmm...
makes me think more of the world
like the bible if that makes any sense.


I am not sure about this unless
you're speaking of a High maintenance
woman?


I am more blue jeans tennis shoes
out door camping Comfort girl
and I hate make up
and not big on jewelry, Make-up and
and jewelry is worldly things I don't need
make up and jewelry to be beautiful God
arrays me with Beauty and I know you know
beauty is on the inside I pray for one's that
wear all that Junk on their face and
too much Jewelry to be beautiful and not
concerned with what's on the inside.


Well you've Inspired me and you get to
see my graph of Ideas here.


And my mother has raised me to where
beauty is on the inside start on the inside
many can see it their soul and heart :)



This line made me laugh
I am guessing you're a car man am I right ?

Your legs

Revs up my libido

Like a V8 engine in overdrive.



But very nice work here.


I Enjoyed reading this Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.


Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What I meant by wordily woman who has beauty all over, inside and outside, and yes the inner beauty is the most important… thank you so much for sharing you in-depth thoughts.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure. blessings. kindred poet

[Bright Ocean Star]

I don't know if I agree with your definition of a worldly woman....maybe a high maintenance woman. Worldly woman has connotations of being an older, more experienced woman...kind of "Graduate"-esq. This was a spectacular write. And I'm glad you didn't mention flower petals and simpering sweetness of nectars early morning dew. This his a very modern, sophisticated edge to it. Very nice, Cowboy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much, what I meant by worldly woman was a woman that has it all :)
Appreciate your review.

[Ice QueenJen]

What a very touching writing and heartwarming too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much… long time no see. Hope you are well.

[Ice QueenJen]

yes I am just busy writing, in fact I posted a chapter in my story I'm working on. Take a look and let me know what you think.