Your Heart Would Be My Heaven

 

The thought of you

Lying next to me

Would be like

Laying on a bed of clouds

Where nothing can touch me

Except your breath

Baptizing my skin.

In that moment

I would be reborn

In the heart,

My soul would find salvation,

My spirit would earn it’s wings,

The devil in me

Would still exist

But your love would be the spell

To release his power

Over me.

Reviews

[Ladysue]

what a romantic write..absolutely love these lines..evocative....

Laying on a bed of clouds
Where nothing can touch me
Except your breath
Baptizing my skin

love can transform us for sure..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much tiny dancer, you are too kind.

[David Scott]

If only...
Yet, maybe just the idea could transform the heart.
I can relate to this well.

[MagicAl]

Romantic write.. "the devil in me would still exist...to release his power" - Particularly loved the ending!! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very kindly.

[MsJewel]

Laying on a bed of clouds
Where nothing can touch me
Except your breath

The imagery here is exquisite. Stunning!
:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very much Julie.

[Marie]

THis is sweet. Love can be Heaven, and it can transformus, if olny for a little while.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you so much Marie

[Corset]

lol, says he while flying horns haha, maybe not release his power but maybe relinquish his momentary hold, heehee, ahh you guys with your devil love, just one side of the same coin isn't it, depending which way you flip it. God contains and created both, like the sky holds sunshine or rain, balance, one doesn't exist without the other, like true lovers. Beautiful words friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, maybe a bit the same but I am like no other man in the world. :)

[Corset]

Every man is made divinely unique :)

[icelandicblue]

This is just lovely. It is so soft and inviting that one cannot help but read it and sigh with content. It is a most Elysian poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow thank you so much for that fantastic comment. :))

[Dhaye]

This is sweet and romantic, cowboy.
Indeed when you are with someone you love, you feel like in heaven or "laying on a bed of clouds".

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks hon, appreciate the wonderful review, glad you enjoyed it.

[Dhaye]

You're welcome.

[s y e]

Holy sweet damn Dale! This is breathtakingly romantic with a hit of longing and passion. This is short but you really get your point across. The wording made it all the more romantic. I just loved it, Dale - well done dude

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so very much sweet Sye

[DIVYA]

There are no words I could have in my cache that could do justice to the divine feelings expressed here...Out of this world...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh wow thank you. that lovely review just made might night :))