Too Sexy For This Senryu

 

Too sexy for words

That’s okay, you have taken

My last breath away.

Reviews

[Marie]

Very good...three lines straight to the point.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you again. I like to get right to the point.

[Patricia]

Right back at ya! great little write! Simple and complicated enough that it questions why couldn't I do that with saying so much with so little....:)))

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you, I love the challenge of writing senryus, it tests my creativity.

[Patricia]

I know what ya mean, it is always a challenge to create something better than what you read of others and by others I mean the classic and modern famous poets at least that is my challenge for myself and what I look for when I read other poets such as yourself.

[An owl on the moon]

I needed a little something sweet and sexy.. and your senryu was perfect! There is a sensual tenderness that makes the world melt away..

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly bro, appreciate it.

[redflutterby]

Aren't you just a smooth talker in this senryu?? Lol... Ha...;-D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Smooth talker… ME? You got the wrong guy there, I stutter too much, LOL

[A. Amos]

Truly enjoyed the read...good one buddy!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.

[A. Amos]

You're welcome buddy

[redzone]

Sorry about intruding in Ance comment, couldn't resist... loved the sass in this poem.. seems like you and whoever it's written for have just the right amount... cool
~~redzone

[Matching Socks]

No way, the comment was funny and I don't really have asthma. Busted...

[redzone]

Hmm busted... uh oh.. in that case, Dale is only guilty of being romantic.. or is that "too sexy for his senyru" tsk tsk.. HA!! ;0)
Phew, now I can take back my "sorry"
I better leave before I'm busted again... lol

[Matching Socks]

:).....................

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You were lying bout the asthma, shame on you *shakes head*

[Matching Socks]

Never let the truth get in the way of a good story.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, I like that.

[Matching Socks]

Yeah, me too. Someone famous said that but I can't remember who...

[redzone]

Ance this is America, all you have to do is repeat a story over and over again and it becomes truth.. miraculously.. hell doesn't even have to be good.. but of course your story was very good... it may have been Mark Twain who said this or Will Rogers...

[Matching Socks]

In Canada, we tell the truth. Unless speaking to Americans, in which case we must modify our approach to even the playing field. No offence to Americans. I absolutely LOVE the Americans. :)

[redzone]

More stories Ance?? ; 0) I can see you LOVE faerie tales.. lol

[Matching Socks]

No more stories. :)

[redzone]

Aaaawwwww and I was just beginning to believe these stories... but Ance, really, thanks for the banter.. I thoroughly enjoyed and I think Dale secretly liked being slammed... hehe.. night Ance, be well and safe... especially from americans

[Matching Socks]

'Twas fun indeed! : ) and yes, I believe he liked it...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Gee who knew my little poem would stir up so much trouble, LOL

[Matching Socks]

LOL. it was quite entertaining...

[Rita L. Sev]

Sweet, with just a touch of fun. Made me smile, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you, glad It made you smile, cause smiling is a great thing.

[s y e]

Very sensual and sexy - romantic in a sense too. I like this one a lot... You're on fire with these writes lately Dale.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Sye, when you have a great muse the writings practiaclly write themselves.

[Matching Socks]

Dear Rock and Roll Cowboy,

I liked your senryu, it took my breath away.
I'd like it back please, I'm asmatic.

Sincerely...

👍

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Sorry bout that, my bad :))

[redzone]

Are you taking advantage of asthmatic women again Dale.. tsk tsk.. ;0)

[Matching Socks]

Lol. :) ........

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

What can I say, I don't know my own strength.

[Matching Socks]

Yes, hot air creates steam which can power a locomotive...
I wish I were full of hot air too. : P

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Some people think that is all I am full of ;)

[Matching Socks]

I disagree, I think you're full of s**t too...

[Matching Socks]

😃. ;) ...... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Say what?? Damn I just got slammed.

[Matching Socks]

You set em up...

[MagicAl]

Oh, short and sweet but so full of lust..good work, :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much.