TKO

A senryu

 

A knockout beauty

When I look at you, I die

And go to heaven.

Reviews

[one sky]

Ah, you're a real poet. Many have been saying those lines. So romantic.
Fall in love with a Martial Arts expert and you will totally be knocked out. LOL.
I enjoyed this one.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, thank you kindly :)

[Marie]

A great senyru, as usual. You can say so much with so few words.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Marie, I love the challenge of doing these.

[Jennie Baron]

The beauty and simplicity of this one is nothing short of amazing. And now my review is longer than the poem and I should stop.

[Matching Socks]

LOL. You should write your next Senryu review as Senryu?

[s y e]

Sweet sentiments, Dale. You're going to make your woman very happy with your words. I loved this one, I love how you make every woman feel like this... Beautiful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I am pretty sure I don't make every woman feel like this but thank you for that sweet sentiment.

[Corset]

a perfect senryu, beautiful sentiments.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

for at least the count of ten.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is all it takes.

[Matching Socks]

Well... Look at you melting girls hearts again ever so efficiently.
Good one again my friend. You've got a knack for these.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I doubt I melt any girls heart. But thank you, I enjoy creating them

[Matching Socks]

You do a great job. They are always fun to read.
You've got me hooked on them, I've been writing my own...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow,I am flattered, always nice to have a positive effect on another person.

[Matching Socks]

Yes, thumbs up.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice avatar, Ance...
she was amazing...

[Matching Socks]

Yes. I do agree. :)