Her Man

A hopeless romantic dreaming of how love should be

All the stars could be shining bright

In the midnight sky

And yet I would still be blinded

By her angelic beauty.

 

When I look directly in her eyes

All my intelligent thoughts

Get lost in a field of fantasies

Of tasting her sweet lips

And her breath breathing

New life into me.

 

I can be myself with her

And still she lets me live in her heart, unconditionally;

That is why I will forever be

What every other guy dreams of being…

 

Her man!!

Reviews

[Mark]

I love this one, romantic definitely, hopeless? God I hope not ;)
Besotted … There is no feeling like it, then to make it unconditional… Show me a man that doesn't crave that state of being and I will smile and remind you that evolution is fluid

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly for the review and sharing your wisdom.

[s y e]

You have had quite a little muse lately Dale and she has you in a very romantic mood... This was so beautiful and just how every girl wants their man to feel... It would make her heart melt if he wrote something like this. Sigh..

[Rita L. Sev]

You are on a roll with these romance pieces, Dale. Your Muse is a fortunate lady!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well my muse is in my mind right now, I am just dreaming of how I want love to make me feel. Thank you again Rita

[Matching Socks]

* sigh

You are so good at these. :)
I really hope you're not a hopeless romantic as your note says.
With words like these... There must be hope.

Loved it!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why do you hope I am not a hopeless romantic? Actually I am and proud to be.

[Matching Socks]

Well, doesn't that mean that you have NO hope?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No it actually means I am hopelessly looking for romance.

[Matching Socks]

Ok!!!!!! Sounds good. See this is why I rarely use metaphors. :)
English is too easy to easy to misinterpret. If I said I was a 'hopeful' romantic it'd be the opposite I suppose. In any case, poem was lovely cowboy. Hopeless, hopeful, hoping... :)

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

Been away a while but like reading the work of others and being a part of the community - especially with writers like yourself. You are so good at capturing what is in the heart :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again sweetie, you are too kind.

[MsJewel]

I can be myself with her
And still she lets me live in her heart, unconditionally
This is how love should be...
Another stunning poem written from your beautiful heart.

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you julie, yes that is how love should make you feel, free to be yourself, not restricted in your actions.

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

I like this one and there is just about nothing more that makes a woman feel special than knowing a good man is happy, and as above, honored to be with her. That is a great feeling to be somewhere with my guy and having him make me feel that way. It is a good good thing. Your words convey that well

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, and so nice to see you in the cafe :)

[Dhaye]

This is beautiful and romantic (hopeless romantic? Lol.). To love unconditionally is a great thing and dreaming is always a part of it.
Great!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you sweetie, appreciate your kind review.

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow!! This is beautiful, Dale. Unconditional love is a brilliant thing to behold and you've penned it well. The love and desire for her burns through this write. Great job!! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Wow thank you Mads, your review just put a huge smile on my face. thank you for your sweet review.

[Jennie Baron]

Unconditional love is so rare but this allows one to dream of it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is so very true… thank you Jennie