My Louvre Shines Bright For You

The hopeless romantic strikes again with his metaphors

Give me your shadow

And I will treat it like a canvas,

Painting it with all the bright colors

From the pigments of my spirit.

For you are the muse

That makes all my artwork

Personally priceless.

Your soul hangs proudly

In every chamber of my heart,

Making it feel like the most valuable gallery

In the world,

And that is why I Louvre You so much.

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

Oh, this is beautiful!! What a wonderful muse she must be!! I'm sure she finds this to be so touching! I know I'm smiling like a cheese ball right now! Hahaha! Fantastic job. The romantic strikes again! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well if there was actually someone then I would hope she'd love it… just a hopeless romantic fantasizing bout loving someone. Thank you Maddy, you are too kind.

[NoelHC]

Nicely written with an unexpected twist at the end, didn't see that coming! Lovely sentiments, well expressed.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, Much appreciated.

[KWP]

That made me smile .. i like it in it's depth , love it in it's simplicity ... leaves you thinking and has great imagery x x thanks chick

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you so much, you are too kind

[Leslie Philibert]

Great write with a clever pun, good idea

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir.

[wordman]

a great piece and a loud groan or was it a moan lol

[Rita L. Sev]

*groan* Cheesy and romantic at the same time - love it! :)

[Frieda P]

I heard that groan from here, ha sorry had to interject :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks Rita, that is me, a cheesy romantic

[Draven]

This poem is so brilliant that I am overcome by it, and I shall even admit my jealousy that I myself didn't come up with this type of metaphor first. I love this piece.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank so much sir, not sure where it came from it just hit me like a two ton brick.

[Pryde Foltz]

Haha … dale. This reminds me of a battle of puns Doctor Wood and I had on twitter. You should write some MOMA of these.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, so glad you enjoyed it.

[Frieda P]

Ha.....nice play on words, cheesy but oh so sweet hon. ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

That is me, Mr Cheesy :) Thanks Moonbeam

[Frieda P]

Gotta love a cheesy cowboy ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay, where is my bucket? Just kidding, well, assuming I ever believed a man who wrote poetry again, this would be lovely to receive ...:) Well done.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you so much, I think

[Lyn Anderson]

You know I am joking, I am just a cynical kitty. Still nursing fresh wounds you know ...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh good, glad to hear that :)
I know what you mean