Oh Mighty Sunrise

I friend of mine on the other side of the world took this pic for me cause they know I love sunrises.

 

Oh mighty sunrise

Blind me with your beauty,

So I may become ignorant

About the nasty shadows

On the horizon.

 

Oh mighty sunrise

Burnout my eyesight,

So my heart’s vision

Can become clearer

Than twenty/twenty.

 

Oh mighty sunrise

Enlighten my world,

So I can break

The spell of fear cast

By the witchin’ hour.

 

Oh mighty sunrise

If you grant me these

Three wishes,

I will serenade you

By singing,

“Goodness, gracious, great ball of fire.”

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh mighty sunrise
If you grant me these
Three wishes,
I will serenade you
By singing,
“Goodness, gracious, great ball of fire.”

LOL … I loved the irreverent end to this Ode of sorts. You and I are on the same wavelength with subject matter, it would seem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much, I consider it to be an honor to be on the same wavelength as you.

[Pryde Foltz]

The honour flows both ways:)

[Frieda P]

I can't see to type, I'm laughing so hard...what a finish!!! ;) haha All your positivity is absofuckinglutely blinding like the SuN!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahha, thank you Moonbeam, you are pretty damn funny

[Frieda P]

Refer to graphic I sent you earlier ;P

[Corset]

laughed out loud at the last line, full of character, very cute and light heart-ed while still exhibiting such talent.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh thank you so much, what a wonderful compliment.

[MsJewel]

I love the sunrise...the picture you shared is amazing and your poem is wonderful! The sun rising does resemble a great ball of fire!

:) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Julie :)

[MsJewel]

My pleasure

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

HA...HA this made me Laugh this was cute and
Witty my friend.



Thank you for sharing this sweet piece and your
lovely review and comments you left on my page.


Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much, blessing to you too.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. It's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[s y e]

Woooohooooo, this was fantastic. It's amazing how a picture can spark a poem. This was well written and the photo is stunning.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks again Sye, the pic was very inspiring. Appreciate the kind feedback.

[Rita L. Sev]

:) Enjoyed that serenade at the end, but your lessons of the sunrise are wise and beautiful. That is an awesome pic, and your poem is the perfect companion.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why thank you so much Rita, the pic was a wonderful inspiration

[Marie]

I'm sure this poem was what Jerry Lee Lewis was trying to say...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I don't think it was but thanks Marie :)

[Calissa Knox]

I really enjoyed reading this. I loved your line, "Burnout my eyesight, So my heart’s vision Can become clearer". Unique, inspiring and beautifully written!

~ Feather

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh thank you so much, I appreciate you kind words.

[Calissa Knox]

You're very welcome.

[KWP]

:) I could read this over and over ... I love it a lot ... amazing where a little inspiration leads you ... well done my friend and thank you x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I have your kindness and photo for this particular inspiration so I should be thanking you xo