Fall From Grace

A Poem by The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

An angel clips her wings

In hopes of flying close

To the majestic eagle,

By destroying her perfect span

God has graced her with,

The balance of the halo is gone,

Causing her to crash into

The devil’s threshold,

Now she is left with no choice

But to sacrifice her innocence

To save her sanctuary's secrets,

And forever be marked

With the number of the beast.

© 2014 The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

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Jennie Baron

Lovely as always, just a couple of things:

Should "innocents" be "innocence"?

The syntax of "the home she love's secrets" is a little awkward. You might consider rewording it "the secrets of the home she loves," or similar.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

You are right not the first one, the second I will think about… thank you so much for your kind th.. read more

11 Years Ago

"Innocence" is right. I have to go along with Jenny B. on the second one. Incidentally, I think mayb.. read more

11 Years Ago

Thank you, I take that as a very high compliment.

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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

It's better to be dead and cool than alive and uncool

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Birth name: Dale Deadmond Born November 20th, 1969 Metaphorically speaking music is my BFF and poetry is my soulmate. This is my world of my favorite poets are E.A. Poe, Dylan Thomas, R.. more..