What? I Can't Hear You!!

Frizzy wizzy,

Wumble bumble,

Acka tacka

Total wacka…

 

If sounds like

I’m not making sense

It’s cause I’m not.

When I speak my mind

No one seems to get me,

So I figured

If I spit out some spew

Others would get me.

 

Purple haze or purple rain,

Either might bring clarity

To why I sing a song

Out of tune

For those who only enjoy

An overly produced melody.

 

Sometimes I want

To lock myself in

A sound proof booth,

Pretending I am deaf

So I cannot hear

Society jeering.

Reviews

[Megan]

I like this. The beginning put me off a bit once you entered the second stanza. Overall, great poem. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

I have found that earphones sometimes come in handy.:) I have to turn off the news, avoid msn, and sing loudly while I walk around town......but then again....i'm a lil odd:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Nothing odd about that, besides being different is good.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sometimes we understand ourselves when we go deeper into
ourselves and experience some things that make us look at our lives.


And yes I do talk to myself LOL...
I even talk to animals like the morning Birds
they understand me :) and animals are very smart they
know what you're saying all the time.

I have learned to understand myself Jesus understands me and
I have some friends that get me and some may not LOL... I have those
days where I just feel weird when I wake up and I am weird to most any how
LOL... I think that is way I love the Minions so much LOL...



I loved this Dale very Cleaver how you spoofed this up
thank you for sharing this wonderful piece and thank you for
your lovely review and comment you left on my page.


Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you for such an insightful review my friend… blessing to you as well.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're Quit welcome my funny friend :) always a pleasure to read something funny or interesting like this that you put together. Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ahhh shucks, thank you, always glad to tickle someone's funny bone

[Kesha]

This is quite cleverly written. I enjoyed it quite a bit actually. Good job!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so very much :)

[Kesha]

You are welcome! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Exactly why I talk to myself a lot... I'm the only one who gets me. I like the progression of this, Dale - silly at the onset, but with a real message.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much Rita, you are a step ahead of me cause I don't even understand myself, LOL

[Cerise]

wonderfully writen am sure most of us can relate to it...how i wish i cud hide from everything and find some peace and rest...but i guess sum wishes stay in wish list itself...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ain't that the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth, LOL

[Frieda P]

Is cowboy feeling a tad under the weather? I love your purple haze or rain, either's fine with moi. ;) Killer last stanza btw....I'm getting one of those booths too.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well get you own cause you can't share mine, LOL
Thank you Moonbeam.

[Frieda P]

Oh we really are in a mood today.....................

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

hahaha, I'm in a mood everyday… we all are in a mood everyday in fact, what kind of mood is the question, LOL I just figured if we were in the same booth that you would be kicking and punching me'

[Frieda P]

Nah I pull hair and bite RAWR ;)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

And i am are you scratch as well.

[Frieda P]

...with a vengeance

[Frieda P]

really I'm just a puddy tat with a big mouth.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

i am gonna be a good boy and let that one slide. LOL

[Frieda P]

What's that something new you're trying? ha

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yep, trying to be a good boy, not liking it too well. Doesn't fit me.

[Lyn Anderson]

Nobody likes me everybody hates me -- a clever spin on that for sure, and very fun -- keep up the different beat, it works for you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much, I don't know any other way to be.

[Jennie Baron]

I enjoyed this a LOT, Dale!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Jennie :)