Three Romantic Senryus From One Strong Cowboy's Heart

 

I have everything

With you, so without you

I would be nothing.

 

You can keep the moon,

Its beauty is an eclipse

Compared to her heart.

 

I will be your light

Whenever your heart is lost

Deep in the darkness.

Reviews

[Kayleigh]

Oh my sweet, you really touch my heart with your romantic side. You know I love your romantic side and how I love your heart. I will be there for you when you need me and I will be your shoulder. I'll be your anything, you know that.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Yes I do know hon… you bring out my romantic side like an untamed lion out of its cage.

[Kieta!]

I love the effort you put into your work! Great job! :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much.

[Marie]

I like them all, especially the third.

In the second line of the second senyru, "its" should not be possessive.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Gorgeous!! all three! So sweet, and wise... enjoyed them.

I do love you make them each time bigger, it gives the reader a feeling you come closer to this special lady.

- Elisa

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Ahhh thank you again my dear friend… you kind words make me blush.

The pleasure is all mine! :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Aw! Each one is sweet, though I particularly like the third senryu. What we all long for - someone to light the way... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thanks so much Rita… I believe you are right. xo

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and sweet.


Very Romantic and lovely thank you for
sharing.


Blessings. kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Awe thank you for being so kind to my verses. blessed be to you.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. It's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet