Nothing To See Here, Just Three Senryus I Wrote

 

In the game of life

I lose far too many times,

But win doing right.

 

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You just have to know

You’ll forever be my heart,

So don’t walk away.

 

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Can I feel your heart?

Of course, its beat jump-starts mine,

Keeping me alive.

 

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮I love all 3 of these, but the last one is my favorite.╰☆╮

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

thank you Brittany, I have to admit it is my fav too.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Truly Lovely I am becoming a fan of your Senryus
as I don't do them LOL... and I can't LOL... so now I am a Fan your Senryus.



Thank you for sharing this Lovely Senryus and
for your kind review and comments you left on my page.


Blessings. Kindred poet

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you very much… I love the challenge senryus pose for me.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

it's a pleasure my friend. you're very welcome. I enjoyed reading it very much. blessings. kindred poet

[Matching Socks]

Nice job here buddy.
I'm a big fan of your Senryus.
:-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh shucks thank you my friend… you are too kind.

[Matching Socks]

Hey, you are the one that inspired me to write Senryus!
Remember? :-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh that is right, glad i can inspire people.

[Kayleigh]

Three for the price of one, my love, aren't we lucky here at the cafe. All of these little poems, Senryu's you called them are beautiful.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you my dear :))

[Tree]

I feel I got my money's worth, three, for the price of one click. I liked the first one best, you don't win by shapeshifting who you are to get what you need, it is better to come up short. Then re group, and recalculate the distance to the goal. Don't compromise the best person inside of you, for a few attaboys and some ego feeding adoration

very cool, d

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sir… appreciate the feedback.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

All good things often happen in three... so also here your good senryu's of hope and love...
I enjoyed Dale. I like it how they are connected as one poem.

- Elisa :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you kindly my dear talented friend.

Aw, you are welcome!! I enjoy your senryu's always! :)

[Marie]

Excellent thoughts. I like the concept of the first one best, but the third line isn't clear enough. Needs rephrasing.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Marie… appreciate the feedback.