Möstly Blüe Without You

I saw Mötley Crüe on their final tour last night so I thought it would be fun to do a poem using some of their song titles. But this time I will not reveal them. And yes it is for my lady.

 

Once I had a taste

Of the wild side

I had trouble

Trying to find myself

Until I found you.

I want to thank you for

Appreciating all

The instruments I play.

You have brought out

The animal in me.

The new tattoo

Around my soul

Is your electric  personality

That will kickstart my heart

Every time you call my name

With desire in your voice.

As I reflect on my life,

Where I’ve been,

Where I am now

And where I am going,

I have one of the sweetest confessions

To reveal to you,

Being in your heart

Is home sweet home to me.

When I look into your starry eyes

I can sincerely admit

That I want to spend

The rest of my life

In your world.

Please promise me

That no matter where life takes us

We will go on with the show

That is our romantic story.

For you’re all I need

And without you

I never would have made it

To the silver screen.

Winding up with you as my

Leading lady

Has given me a happier Hollywood ending

Than anything I could've

Written myself.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Ah, the Crüe.
Man I crushed over Vince and Tommy so bad.
Lovely poem for your lady. :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Very cool, Nikki Sixx is one of my Idols. Thank you so much.

[Matching Socks]

Meh, I'm a kinda shallow so I went for the pretty ones.
Poor Mick Mars though... Did he perform what with the not being able to move his neck.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Oh yeah he played and kicked butt on guitar.

[Dhaye]

This is great, knowing that you used some song titles to be the lines of this poem. Wow! This is is really amazing, Sir.
Thank you for the share.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well thank you for the kind review, I love the creative challenge it brings.

[Tree]

Kick starting your heart. It's hard to be away from or to release from someone who has given you that kind of power. The kind that make you believe again. You express this honestly, and sincerely. Oh, and good to know the Crue is still jamming, out there somewhere.

Thanks for sharing this, D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you sir… yes that is the kind of person you don't let go of.

They are on their farewell tour actually, and can still kick a*s.

[Tree]

Yes. don't let go of....

[Frieda P]

This is really cool Dale, you nailed it, and then some, and such an electric love song to boot!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you Moonbeam, mucho appreciated.

[Frieda P]

I just noticed jacob said electric poem too, no wonder people think we're the same person....

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You and Jacob are the same person? How do you get that beard to grow back so fast?

[Frieda P]

Lots of testosterone lol....but he won't give me my plaid shirt back!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

electric guitars, electric love...electric poem...

chemistry abounds between you and your lady...and you did wonderful job with this...putting the song titles in...

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Thank you so much sir, always appreciate when you enjoy my work.